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Will He Save Her? Narrative Writing

Will He Save Her?

Narrative Writing

WALT: write a narrative that is descriptive (paints a picture in the reader's mind)

This week we are creating a piece of narrative writing about a comic book hero!

You are to use the picture on the left as your story starter or even your story finisher. Not sure what this means? Well, the picture could depict what is happening in the beginning of your story. You would describe the events from the picture then tell your audience what happens next. Or if you’re using the picture as your story ending, what are the events that led to this action packed scene?

Fill in the below table to help you plan.

Planning:	Your Thoughts and Answers:
Are you using the picture as the beginning or ending of your story?	Ending
Hero:	Kidnight
Villain:	Shadow Ninja
Other Characters (if any):	Knightman Vanillaman  Astroman  Laserman  Stormman  Weirdo Man Daggerman  Kick-Ass Bad-Ass Deadman Thingman Hookman
Hook:	Hook
Problem:	This girl is about to die and it’s up to Kidnight  to save her
Solution:	Kidnight  follows  the evil Shadow Ninja and save the  girl
if beginning, what could happen next?
If ending, what happened before this scene?

Start Writing Here:One day in the night there’s this kid his name is KidNight. He’s a kid 5 foot tall his name is  Josh tWeirdo Weirdo I know you are

His name is Kidnight cause he’s used to saving in the night not daytime but with his partner in crime KidDay he is like KidNight but used to both so he is good at saving at daytime’s and nighttimes but KidNight is way better. So that completes the team but they also have a scientist helper his name is Professor Joseph he makes weapons & also made the vehicles I saved the best for last he also makes the suits It is so cool. KidNight &  KidDay went to go then he saved the day the end

Week 4: Term 2

Week 3: Term 1

Suzie Fig Lan

W2T2 Dictogloss

Wham! The door slams behind me as I fall into the house.The whooshing of the wind can be heard through the walls.Clink! Clink! Clink! Hail begins to fall against the windows making my head snip. If only I wasn't home  alone.Crash! ‘’Hello? Is anyone there? I call into The darkness.When all of a sudden, Mum’s spotted cat comes tearing across the kitchen floor into my arms.Purr.Purr. I'm glad someone is home to great me.

W3T2 Dictogloss

Now that you have listened to the text three times, use your notes to reconstruct the text below.

   Superman the most powerful beam in the universe a alien from kilow  from the planet krypton that was raised to become a american superhero.He use;s strength speed flight. In his civilian identity called clark. He is a founding member  of the justice league of american